Comments regarding what needs to be fixed:

IT Solution: The submission aptly describes an IT solution to install user activity and behavior monitoring software, create a team of specialized analysts, and implement relevant security controls to protect processed information; however, sufficient detail to support the IT solution and an explanation of how it addresses the identified problem is not clear.

Review of Other Work: The submission appropriately reviews articles related to the proposed project; however, only one citation could be found.

Rationale: The submission appropriately describes the potential harm from insider threats; however, sufficient detail could not be found explaining how this applies to the specific project.

Project environment: The submission provides a basic description of the current project environment; however sufficient detail of the state of affairs that makes the proposed project necessary could not be found.

Outcome: The submission appropriately describes the outcome and identifies some measures that will be used to assess the completed project. However, a discussion of how the success and effectiveness of the project will be measured could not be found.