material: https://youtu.be/7BYxHBn2GO0
Task:
Write a personal response paragraph of approximately 250 words that discusses Keteku‘s main idea in his poetronica poem “Right Side Up”. Discuss how the speaker’s perspective and identity are communicated through language and performance techniques.
Use the following guiding questions to help brainstorm notes for your paragraph response.
Identity and Message
What is the main idea or message of the performance?
What is Keteku’s perspective or point of view?
Who is the intended audience?
What does this performance reveal about Keteku’s personal, social, and/or cultural identity?
Rhetorical Strategies
What rhetorical strategies does the speaker use to convey his message more effectively?
What is the developmental structure?
Language
What language does the speaker/storyteller use?
Performance Techniques
What voice techniques does the speaker use to convey the message?
What performance techniques does the speaker use?
How do the visual components contribute to the perspective in the video?
How does the music contribute to the development of Keteku’s perspective?
How does the creative expression contribute to the development of Keteku’s perspective?
What was your reaction to the performance?
The muscular red drum broke the surface of the wind-rapped water, attempting to shake the popping cork loose from his gaping jaws. As the fish slid out of the heavy-duty net and onto the weather-stained deck, I counted seven spots, the most of the day. With the 10-horsepower trolling motor propelling the boat slowly, just above the years of built up mud and oyster shells, we monitor the narrow channels, imprisoned by miles of alligator-infested reeds, for rosy, translucent tails trolling five feet off the shore.
Before heading back to Dothan after my family’s last trip to New Orleans this past Christmas, we stopped for brunch at Atchafalaya, the only restaurant in Nola with five A’s. Known as one of the top 10 brunch restaurants in the country, Atchafalaya is famous for their chicken and biscuits, so obviously, I accompanied that order with a cup of turtle and alligator gumbo. These chicken and biscuits may seem simple, but they aren’t even in the same category as the generic Hardees chicken biscuit. Two homemade buttermilk biscuits, topped with two whole fried chicken breasts, and doused in gravy, along with the gumbo that sounded like roadkill but tasted like Heaven, held up as the perfect last Nola meal before the five-hour trip back to Dothan.